Les derniers coups de coeur
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D'Artagnan (Juncker)
Journal d'un cadet
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Bouncer
6. La veuve noire
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Nuits écorchées (Les)
1. Progénitures
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Guerrero (Le Gendre)
1. L' étranger
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Ensembles contraires (Les)
1. Première partie
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Billy Wild
2. Le 13ème cavalier
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| Hi!
first i like it pretty much. Drawings are great and the stage is very attractive with the threatening characters on top. Very lively, and the map in the back is a good idea also. I like it. However the discussion between the two women is a bit too harsh and then not as attractive. This is also due to the colors you've put which are a bit too bright.
As for me, you should try to achieve a new scene between those two characters, because that one is a little bit too confusing and not enough explicit (i can hardly figure out what the reason of their discussion).
But anyway this is a good job. 
Cheers
Message édité par elpingos le 16-04-2008 à 14:01:18
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and artwise...? 
Would you pick it up out of interest...? 
